Reference Scott Kelby's video, take a looksee at his second shot.

House roof's to left & Right, trees nearly growing out of models head.

The top of the white wall behind model, cuts right through her eye line.

Scott should have looked to his left, plain white wall, would have gone nice with her whiteish dress, or sat her on the grass and used the shrubbery as a backdrop.

Tips courtesy of FDCC (Bob)